Saturday, February 12, 2011

The Mental Circus 3

Taking note of all that floats
Losing time and losing hope
However now I'm really stoked

Alone could be a state of mind
The tones invoked deep inside
'Least there's no need to dry my eyes

Mindscaping to my personal islet
While my body moves on auto-pilot
Must appreciate Ms. Violet

© Rahul Chidambaran 2011


  1. I really liked this one, especially the line "Alone could be a state of mind."

  2. JZKnowles-Smith - thanks...much appreciated

    Jane Doe - Thank you too...big fan!

  3. Hi:

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  4. Jingle - ah I was unable to reach an internet connection in time to post on the Potluck! I will promptly contribute 3 poems on next week's Potluck!