Taking note of all that floats
Losing time and losing hope
However now I'm really stoked
Alone could be a state of mind
The tones invoked deep inside
'Least there's no need to dry my eyes
Mindscaping to my personal islet
While my body moves on auto-pilot
Must appreciate Ms. Violet
Losing time and losing hope
However now I'm really stoked
Alone could be a state of mind
The tones invoked deep inside
'Least there's no need to dry my eyes
Mindscaping to my personal islet
While my body moves on auto-pilot
Must appreciate Ms. Violet
© Rahul Chidambaran 2011
Fine thoughts.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this one, especially the line "Alone could be a state of mind."
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